Sphere Map 故事（英）：修订间差异

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2024年11月17日 (日) 15:53的版本

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@@ 第94行： / 第94行： @@
 It's the morning of the first day...
-....and youve discovered an awful leftover of Weirs eaten alive by werewolves...
+....and you've discovered an awful leftover of Weirs eaten alive by werewolves...
 Weirs: (The dead can't speak)
-Trin: Nah, we can't play this game with three players. (Two and a bot?)
+Trin: Nah, we can't play this game with three players.
+Weirs：(Two and a bot?)
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@@ 第144行： / 第146行： @@
-Weirs: Wait, hat are you going to do?
+Weirs: Wait, what are you going to do?
@@ 第189行： / 第192行： @@
 <nowiki>---------------------</nowiki>
-'''Present06pt2（支线-节点Kok’s Galaxy）'''
+'''Present06pt2（支线-节点Kok's Galaxy）'''
 Weirs:（踩到Kok's Galaxy)
@@ 第203行： / 第206行： @@
-Weirs:(This is everything that moves is good-to eat company speaking. Retreat,retreat )
+Weirs:(This is everything that moves is good-to eat company speaking. Retreat,retreat. )
 Trin:(Did you hit your head Weirs?)
@@ 第211行： / 第215行： @@
 '''Present07&08（节点The Deepest Gate—The Darksphere）'''
-Damsel: What are you playing at
+Damsel: What are you playing at?
 Why are you coming back, Conway?
@@ 第218行： / 第222行： @@
 Weirs: Geez! S'matter with you?
-Trin: Carefull! She's not acting normal!
+Trin: Careful! She's not acting normal!
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-Trin: Ahl You came all the way to find me.
-We mustve seen each other before,right?
+Trin: Ah! You came all the way to find me.
+We must've seen each other before,right?
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@@ 第506行： / 第511行： @@
 '''And stop calling me trash whatsogatherum.'''
-Weirs: It's your job
+Weirs: It's your job.
 Trin:(Hm? It feels like I too had something important to do...)